vichea
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« on: September 21, 2007, 04:37:03 PM » |
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Hello my friend, and thank 4 ur suggestions. Now i have another problem. If i have enough vocab, how can i prepare it to be coherence and good 1. Vichea.
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Ramin
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« Reply #1 on: September 24, 2007, 05:34:18 PM » |
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Hi Vichea  I always have problem with writing too and I consider it as my poorest skill among the four. Sometimes I have a lot of ideas, but I put it in mixed order so that my piece of writing seem like rubbish. Now I try to write everything in order that have introduction, body, and conclusion. If u don’t mind, i can take an example about IELTS writing: - Introduction, state the general comment or trend that we can sth is hapening in which way like increasing or dropping down sth like that. - Body, this can be up to 4 or 5 paragraphs based on how long u would write. - Conclusion, my teacher said that a good piece of writing should have conclusion just like human being who have head, body and leg! but you may find different styles beside this. In conclusion you may summarise some important points that u have mentioned above and then just give some opinion about the topic and that’s all. Don’t forget to revise again and check spelling and grammar accuracy after finishing. Ramin, this just little help  |
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I dont care whether it is a white or black cat, but if it can catch mice, it is a good cat. (Deng Xiao Ping, former Chinese leader)
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« Reply #2 on: September 27, 2007, 07:41:52 PM » |
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I agree with you, Ramin. But I'm not so sure that your writing is your poorest skill.  |
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Ramin
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« Reply #3 on: September 28, 2007, 10:00:18 PM » |
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Hi Sokheang_thea Your writing is superb, i have learnt lots of useful ideas and your style when I print it from this site. Hope you can share some tips Ramin |
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I dont care whether it is a white or black cat, but if it can catch mice, it is a good cat. (Deng Xiao Ping, former Chinese leader)
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« Reply #4 on: September 29, 2007, 12:18:46 AM » |
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some tips? you have known all of them, I guess. I've read your essay. it's excellent! i'll do if i have free time. Why don't you share some of your own tips? |
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vichea
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« Reply #5 on: September 30, 2007, 06:21:11 PM » |
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Hello my friends thank for your suggestion for my problem na.  |
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Ramin
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« Reply #6 on: October 01, 2007, 05:00:29 PM » |
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Hello my friends thank for your suggestion for my problem na. Hi vichea, It is ok, we all frined, arent we? |
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« Reply #7 on: October 01, 2007, 05:05:35 PM » |
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Hi Sokheang_thea Indeed I do not have any special tips, but I have read your essay you said *be industrious* this is a great motivated words for all learners and I will ever never forget it when I feel lazy with my studying, thanks you guy Ramin |
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I dont care whether it is a white or black cat, but if it can catch mice, it is a good cat. (Deng Xiao Ping, former Chinese leader)
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« Reply #8 on: October 01, 2007, 07:29:58 PM » |
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Hi Vichea I always have problem with writing too and I consider it as my poorest skill among the four. Sometimes I have a lot of ideas, but I put it in mixed order so that my piece of writing seem like rubbish. Now I try to write everything in order that have introduction, body, and conclusion. If u don’t mind, i can take an example about IELTS writing: - Introduction, state the general comment or trend that we can sth is hapening in which way like increasing or dropping down sth like that. - Body, this can be up to 4 or 5 paragraphs based on how long u would write. - Conclusion, my teacher said that a good piece of writing should have conclusion just like human being who have head, body and leg! but you may find different styles beside this. In conclusion you may summarise some important points that u have mentioned above and then just give some opinion about the topic and that’s all. Don’t forget to revise again and check spelling and grammar accuracy after finishing. Ramin, this just little help Yeah! some useful tips ramin. |
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« Reply #9 on: October 01, 2007, 07:58:01 PM » |
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May be Sokheang has some good idea for us in writing skill. He got the first rank, so should help.
Please now!
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Things are not always they used to be! Start new one.
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« Reply #10 on: October 01, 2007, 08:08:08 PM » |
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May be Sokheang has some good idea for us in writing skill. He got the first rank, so should help.
Please now!
I even now curious to learn then. |
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« Reply #11 on: October 01, 2007, 08:32:46 PM » |
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All of you guys are great!!! I wish I were one of you!!!
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I regret not knowing earlier what I know now!!!
Regret for yesterday and fear for tomorrow are the tragedies of life!!
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« Reply #12 on: October 01, 2007, 08:38:06 PM » |
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All of you guys are great!!! I wish I were one of you!!!
Let me ask you first: If I were you, what would i'm going to be? And what kind of person I am |
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Things are not always they used to be! Start new one.
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« Reply #13 on: October 01, 2007, 08:40:00 PM » |
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All of you guys are great!!! I wish I were one of you!!!
Let me ask you first: If I were you, what would i'm going to be? And what kind of person I am I guess, kimlong does not want to be the real you. But he wants to learn something just as you are smart...bla bla...(just the smart parts...) |
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« Reply #14 on: October 01, 2007, 08:42:52 PM » |
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All of you guys are great!!! I wish I were one of you!!!
Let me ask you first: If I were you, what would i'm going to be? And what kind of person I am I guess, kimlong does not want to be the real you. But he wants to learn something just as you are smart...bla bla...(just the smart parts...) Yes, I ask him if I would have knowledge like him, not body and mind |
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